Derek known to his friends as southern boy is confronted by Derek a upper class child about why he hasn't been invited to Dereks party. EXT. Playground - DAY Derek Ya see it wasn't ma decision Chris Who made the decision, then? Derek Arnolds Chris Your party Derek Mam said the van would- Chris (cutting off) My mom can bring Derek (cutting off) Don't wanna put your mam Chris (cutting off) She will not mind Derek (cutting off) Last time Chris I didn't mean t Derek You clobbered him over his head with a blast Chris I was reloading Derek You thought you were Rambo. Your banned anyway. Mam says Chris What about... Derek Mom says you are crazy Chris What about this fantastic birthday present... Through writing this I have learnt a technique of covering up the characters names to see if their dialogue is easily to distinguish.
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