Dialogue

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Derek known to his friends as southern boy is confronted by Derek a upper class child about why he hasn't been invited to Dereks party.
EXT. Playground - DAY


Derek
Ya see it wasn't ma decision
Chris
Who made the decision, then?
Derek
Arnolds
Chris
Your party
Derek
Mam said the van would-
Chris
(cutting off)
My mom can bring
Derek
(cutting off)
Don't wanna put your mam
Chris
(cutting off)
She will not mind
Derek
(cutting off)
Last time
Chris
I didn't mean t
Derek
You clobbered him over his head with a blast
Chris
I was reloading
Derek
You thought you were Rambo. Your banned anyway. Mam says
Chris
What about...
Derek
Mom says you are crazy
Chris
What about this fantastic birthday present...



Through writing this I have learnt a technique of covering up the characters names to see if their dialogue is easily to distinguish.

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